I struggled through the book because the translation caused it to have broken English and some sentences didn't make any sense. I was invested in the story line so I made it to the end only to find out you had to buy volume to continue with the story. I would have bought it (only because I needed to know how it ended) but it is NOT available on Kindle app!! It wasn't worth going through that hassle!
Changed the names and grammar is horrible.
This book was incomplete, I didn’t know what happen when her husband travel to the capital to rescue her. What a waist of time
I was intrigued by the storyline preview i read on fb. The names were English names and the story drew me in. I ended up researching the books and when I found them the names were no longer English names and the translation was oh so difficult to follow. Yet I continued. I was invested in the main characters. I am only on book 3. I didn't mind paying .99 per book but I am not willing to pay 3.99 per book. So here is where we part ways. Unfortunately, I will not know how the story progresses.
The story line is good, the translation makes it hard to read, the pronouns are all messed up.. "Of Course", I read the whole book.
Wonderful story. English translation is a little off, but still can follow. I am very excited to start the next book.
I loved reading this book. It was the most beautiful love story ever. I pray that one day I find a man as loving and sting as Qin Yue, also known as Leo Qin.
Book was interesting but sometimes hard to follow due to pronoun issues. Not a lot of depth in the storyline but enjoyable for a "light" read
There were soooooo many grammatical and gender errors, it was doing my head in! But the storyline was absolutely captivating. I've just stayed up through the night to finish it. Getting the next one now... ☺
The story was incomplete, total waste of time and the grammar was horrendous. The storyline was good but will never know what happened in the end!
I loved the story line from what I could understand, but unfortunately the translation into English was very poor.
In particular the references to gender.
Grammer was extremely poor too.
Very good book couldn't put it down, read it over a night. Hope there is a follow on book can't just end like that.
Why are books being sold without proof reading before hand?? Grammar 0
It makes the story so confusing!
The story line was interesting but it was so annoying to read!
The grammar was horrible. The “he” and “she” kept getting messed up that it was making the story confusing.
Why dont you sell the entire volume together...
Please check the pronouns properly "he is used instead of she or her " at many places in entire book.
Good book, it is just a part though, I thought that I will Stop reading the next parts when I was reading, since the grammar mistakes are terrible. But once I finished this part, I am not able to stop myself from reading next part, even if it has so much mistake. Anyway enjoyed it. Recommended for people with high EQ.
Interesting book..I want to continue reading..but it is really horrible that there is no proper ending in a single edition.
Nice romantic story. Dedicated, caring husband that any girl would dream of. But the names are complicated to remember. It would have been better if the characters had simpler and common names..
I like the story.. I think this book would help other to learn that trying new things can be scary, but sometimes when we try, we can find things that make us happy too. And this book will help others know that mistakes are okay and part of learning.
Like it
Beautiful
Want to read more related
I like it
I like the character of the husband.
Like the story
The chapters are long and some were unnecessary. It didn't help that the English translation was confusing. I'm pretty sure that the story is nice but became boring after awhile.
Good story,nice family story,but translation is poor we find difficult to understand some characters where lot of 'he' and 'she' are mixed up.